Is it you, or an angel?

Hello...

I was really vella these days but still didn't blog. Just because ummmm.. didn't have anything so great to write on. 

Well, as of now, I present you a simple cheerful poem with a definite rhyming scheme (I swear, I didn't try too hard to make them rhyme. Well that's how you should write).

At the British council, during one of my lessons, I learnt that you shouldn't be making an effort to rhyme the poem. It should seem as a professional piece. 

To write a good poem, one needs to learn to read more and more poems. 

It's not compulsory either to give the poem a rhyming scheme, however, if it's having, it's great. 

Also, keep in mind that the length of the lines is somewhat similar (Though I know that I can never in my life keep them trimmed).However, I've not yet implemented all these with such a hard-and-fast rule, thanks to my lazy attitude.

Here I present to you a sensational poem : Is it you, or an angel?

When the door bell rings

An angel steps in and sings

She comes near to me, makes me numb

Puts her aura on me, with her two fingers and a thumb

She pans her magic wand in the air

Makes the devils dance with the flair

She smiles, she cheers, she glance

Makes me feel like a king in a trance

The angel’s like you or you’re like an angel

I see you now and here, probably everywhere

As I drew my hands to touch your white skin

My mom said ‘Just wake up, it’s nine in the morning’

 

Now you can feel free to comment on it.heheheh..